This is my 3rd page. Same as the 2nd page but changed my layouts after critique session and of own satisfaction.

Now this is my 2nd page. Difference before critique was that I didnt include in the navigation bar below the 'my life as a war reporter' instead I used the little piece of paper on the left again as my navigation. T thought it was a sucky website if it was like that. So I thought of putting in the usual user friendly navigation bar for people to choose their topics easily. And that each time they choose a different topic, the name of the topic will be indicated on that piece of paper on the left to remind the user which page exactly he/she is in currently.

before and after comments

Well 1st of all I would wanna aplogize that I have no BEFORE...only after..haha!! Because I overwrited my files =.= so sorry but I'll roughly tell what I have changed after abit of comments from Yik Jian. Okay, for the index page, supposing the middle was expty. I was only using the little piece of paper on the left as my navigation but now I have shift my selections to the middle and the indication on the little piece of paper. And other things that has changed are my over all layout of my text and that image.