Now this is my 2nd page. Difference before critique was that I didnt include in the navigation bar below the 'my life as a war reporter' instead I used the little piece of paper on the left again as my navigation. T thought it was a sucky website if it was like that. So I thought of putting in the usual user friendly navigation bar for people to choose their topics easily. And that each time they choose a different topic, the name of the topic will be indicated on that piece of paper on the left to remind the user which page exactly he/she is in currently.